I would suggest: • Describe the single main problem you want to solve in a sentence or two (not more!). • Give a simple example of something that’s hard to do usually, and seems “obvious” to the reader that it shouldn’t be that hard. • Give the same example in your language (which, supposedly, should be pretty small). • Explain in a sentence or two what makes it easy, so the reader has a sense of the generality of the approach. All this must be done in sufficiently few words that even a barely interested reader will read it all.

Then you should be on a good trail to get the reader’s attention and give more details, and explain what other problems this solves.

Anyone have any thoughts/experience with OpenTelemetry (https://opentelemetry.io)?