ccshan
2018-11-10 01:45:16
I suggest revising the text first
carette
2018-11-10 01:46:16
Why? I don’t see how that would help.
ccshan
2018-11-10 01:47:14
I don’t know if it would help, but the text needs revised anyway (based on the new paragraphs bracketed at the beginning) and the revision process may present shortening ideas.
carette
2018-11-10 01:47:59
By one page, sure! 4? I don’t see it.
carette
2018-11-10 01:48:24
But it seems like you might.